Good presentation
Style was superb and stayed mostly consistent. Scene progression was interesting and used a lot of camera angles to show the fight, which I liked. Animation-wise, I felt that the sword looked too weightless the way it was being handled. Slicing through something with a sword requires the body's full force behind it, with proper technique of course, so there should be more movement in the legs and lower body to provide the momentum for each swing. Overall nice work though.
Its true I forgot or missed some details about that, Ill try to improve this kind of things on my future animations :)
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Animation was nice and smooth. That one creature in the cave didn't move too well though. I suggest taking the next step and try animating more complex shapes and attempting more complex movement. Wouldn't recommend using the same method you used for this movie though. It would take too long :P
well my next flash is gonna be done on the computer anyway, so that might suit you more
I know, just a test.
This just caught my eye cuz your art looks like how my art used to look like.
Just for future projects: cleaner art and cleaner animation?
Animating human figures is pretty damn hard; I suggest studying good quality (FLCL quality) animations or anime and watch some parts frame-by-frame to get the feel of the movements. It sure helped me.
Well, i was curious what your art looked like but i found nothing made by you, so i really couldn't compare myself to yo.
I see you're a piece of fucking perfectionist. And seriously, FLCL quality is too much for me. Maybie 2-3 authors on the newgrounds can actually compare themselves to it. I get the feel of the movement.
Anyway, making something like FLCL would take one person a life, and 2 years to the professional animation studio with almost 100 men crew who were born with pencil in their hands.
And i think that animating a fly/dot/whatever isn't the true nature of fbf.
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